May 25, 2012

Script update


After a few minutes of reflection I did my first re-write today.  I added a scene of reflection for the main character.  It gives her a chance to take an out before she makes that final life altering decision.  I wanted the moral implications to play a bigger role in the film.  So I added what every good film should have, a priest, someone to ground the main character.  I do not know if it worked but it does offer that human interaction needed to make it more emotional for the end of the film.

It will really tie it together. 

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