After a few minutes of
reflection I did my first re-write today.
I added a scene of reflection for the main character. It gives her a chance to take an out before
she makes that final life altering decision.
I wanted the moral implications to play a bigger role in the film. So I added what every good film should have,
a priest, someone to ground the main character.
I do not know if it worked but it does offer that human interaction
needed to make it more emotional for the end of the film.
It will really tie it together.
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