After a few minutes of reflection I did my first re-write today. I added a scene of reflection for the main character. It gives her a chance to take an out before she makes that final life altering decision. I wanted the moral implications to play a bigger role in the film. So I added what every good film should have, a priest, someone to ground the main character. I do not know if it worked but it does offer that human interaction needed to make it more emotional for the end of the film.
It will really tie it together.